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Rorschach by ~aburnier:iconaburnier:

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©2009 ~aburnier
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No it isn't Rorschach, but the trench coat reminded me of him XD. You probably guessed it, but this is another drawing for my summer online courses. The point was once again to master human form and proportions. I did a wife frame sketch before so that the proportions were pretty spot-on. '

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:iconchrisntheboat:
*chrisntheboat Jul 1, 2009, 6:38:24 AM
most certainly one of your best drawings:clap:
Bravo.. you did great on the structure and composition:)

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~aburnier Jul 1, 2009, 7:39:16 AM
why thank you!

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*chrisntheboat Jul 1, 2009, 8:16:04 AM
:nod:

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~haohaohayashi Jul 1, 2009, 10:21:44 AM
proportions are a bit off, and he looks a little bit flat as well.
but your line quality is very top notch.

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~aburnier Jul 1, 2009, 2:21:49 PM
Thank you, but how are the proportions off if I might ask. I measured the eight approximate head lengths down for the body, the arms extend slightly past the waist and so forth. I can understand if you meant the face, because I have little experince with drawing them, but as far as bodies go I thought I was pretty spot on. I am welcome to criticism, so any help you can give would be great! Thanks.

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~haohaohayashi Jul 1, 2009, 3:04:21 PM
The legs seem very short and the upper body seems a tad bit elongated (this maybe be due to the level of elevation of your belt though).

The right arm also seems to have some depth issues. Is the Radius/ulna behind the humerus or in front (or just side be side)? You make it seem like it's behind though, and if that is the case the humerus part of the arm should be more foreshortened. The arm is also a bit crooked as it hits the sleeve of the jacket (but i'm just nit-picking there)

Sorry I don't know how to describe it in words at best, but I think there are just some minor issues with the anatomy of your character that you'd might want to look into. haha sorry if I confused you, but hope this comment helps =P

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~aburnier Jul 1, 2009, 4:06:18 PM
It sort of does. I think the first part was just me placing the belt too low, and the second part I have no idea about. I will probably see it better after I take anatomy next year.

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~haohaohayashi Jul 1, 2009, 7:59:00 PM
haha aiite keep up the good work though man

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~Quadgurl Jul 2, 2009, 6:04:37 AM
RAWSKAWCH
oh wait, its not.
still.
i can imagine :<

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